He tried it. His eyebrows shot up. “Okay. Wow. Okay.”
“It’s everything I wanted it to be,” I whispered. “Sure. Floral. Deep. It doesn’t taste like Whitley’s jam. It tastes like… like possibility.”
We looked at each other, the weight of the moment finally settling between us.
“If this doesn’t work,” I whispered, “at least it’s our failure.”
Micah leaned closer, wiping a smudge of jam from my cheek with his thumb. “But what if it does?”
The question hung in the air like a spark waiting to ignite.
Then we worked in silent harmony—pouring, capping, labeling. I didn’t have custom stickers yet, just a handwritten strip of masking tape that read: Dana’s Hibiscus Cherry. Batch One.
We filled ten jars before the batch was gone. We left them to cool on the counter, the soft pop of each closing lid echoing like applause.
I leaned against the sink, staring at our tiny jam-covered battlefield.
“You know,” I said quietly, “I used to think that if I ever left the factory, I’d be walking away from everything I’d built.”
“And now?” Micah asked.
I looked at the jars. “Now I think I’m just getting started.”
He walked across the kitchen and put his arm around my waist. “So what do we do next?”
“We’re sleeping,” I said, laughing as I rested my head on his shoulder. “Then we’ll see if anyone there wants to try a little rebellion in a jar.”
The next afternoon, twelve glass jars clinked inside a cardboard grocery box lined with a dishcloth. I clutched them like a newborn.
Micah drove us thirty minutes to Wesville in his old truck, his hands firmly on the wheel, while I mentally rehearsed every possible disaster.
What if the jam ferments? What if the shop owner doesn't like floral notes? What if the jars shatter on contact with the counter and I stand there blinking—covered in cherry syrup and humiliation?
"You're breathing like you're about to give a TED Talk," Micah said gently.
"I feel like I'm going to throw up," I admitted, staring at the tape-like labels. Dana's Hibiscus Cherry. Batch One.
He reached over and squeezed my hand. "One store. That's it. The worst that awaits us is eating jam all year long."
"The worst that awaits us is being laughed out of town."
He looked at me. "Then we'll laugh harder on the way back."
The Three Pines Farm Market sign came into view – wooden, hand-painted, with that crooked charm that reminded me of everything I wanted this jam to be. Honest. Local. A little wild.
Micah parked next to the dusty Subaru, and I forced myself out of the truck. The autumn air was crisp and carried that cozy mountain scent – part smoke, part apple peel, part cold earth.
My boots crunched on the gravel as I walked up the porch steps, a box in my arms, my stomach in my throat.
The shop itself smelled like heaven: baked goods, fresh hay, cinnamon sticks, wooden crates overflowing with apples and pumpkins, and chalkboards advertising goat soap and local raw honey.
Behind the counter stood a woman with silver curls pulled back by a red bandana and a look that said she didn't suffer fools. The nameplate said NANCY in bold red lettering.
"Delivery?" she asked, examining the box.
"Kind of," I said. "I'm Dana. I made a small batch of jam. I'd like you to try it. Just a sample. No strings attached."
Nancy leaned over the counter as if she'd heard this song before and wasn't expecting much. "Everyone and their cousins make jam this time of year."
"Right," I said quickly. "But this one is a little different. Hibiscus and cherry. Floral opening, bright finish, pH balanced, small batch. I steeped the hibiscus instead of steeping it."
Nancy raised her hand. "Give me a spoon."
Micah handed me one from the small bag we'd brought, and I opened the jar with trembling fingers. The snap of the seal echoed like a gunshot in my ears.
Nancy dipped her spoon in, examined the color, then tasted it.
Then she stopped – her eyebrow raised, her lips pursed in thought.
I stopped breathing.
Nancy tapped the spoon on the rim of the jar, set it down, and looked at me with a slow nod.
"It's got a kick," she said. "A real, characterful kick."
I blinked. "In a good way?"
"In the best way," she said. "It tastes like someone finally gave a cherry a personality. I'll take the whole case."
I stared at her. "All twelve jars?"
She laughed. “You think I'll try this and send you home? Tourists will eat it up. You have the mark.”
“Um, I…” (I cleared my throat) I glanced at Micah. “Sort of. I'm still working it out.”
Nancy slid a small billing pad toward me. “You'll work it out later. Leave me your number. Write it down here. And if you have more, call me.”
I did as she asked, trying to keep my handwriting steady. She tore out the bill and wrote a note at the top in neat cursive.
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